Chapter 11 talks about, taking your sources and information that you have gathered and putting it in to a position and a statement that is relent to your research question. This should be or help you find your research thesis and provide a clear statement in which your paper will be about. Make sure you keep revising you position statement so it can be as clear as possible to the reader. After making your main statement review your notes add important information, ideas, and arguments that you want to use. When going over your notes and rereading things this will give you a deeper understanding of your topic and lets you go into more detail. Drafting you thesis is hard because its the most important sentence in your paper. You need to use information, ideas, and arguments related to your topic. Try to make it as crisp as possible. Look at the format that your paper needs to be in, for our class we our writing in MLA format.
Draft Alternatives
position statement
Thesis statement- Asking readers to learn something new.
Thesis Statement-  Asking reader to change their attitudes.
Thesis statement- Asking readers to take action.
 Try different approaches and change up your writing style.